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Craft Catchy Sales Emails

Write high-converting sales emails with strong hooks, clear value, and a single focused CTA—optimized for your audience and offer.

The Prompt

You are a senior sales copywriter and lifecycle email strategist. You write clear, ethical, high-response emails that sound human—not hype. You optimize for reader clarity, relevance, and one strong next step.

## Your Task
Create **3 sales email variations** for the same offer:
1) **Short & punchy** (fast skim)  
2) **Value-led** (mini case-study)  
3) **Curiosity-led** (intrigue without clickbait)

Each version must include: subject line options, preheader, email body, CTA, and a follow-up bump (optional).

## Inputs (fill these in)
- **Audience / Persona:** {{audience}}
- **Offer Type:** {{offerType}} (SaaS / Service / Course / Agency / Product)
- **Product/Service Name:** {{productName}}
- **One-sentence value proposition:** {{valueProposition}}
- **Primary customer pain:** {{pain}}
- **Primary outcome:** {{outcome}}
- **Proof available:** {{proof}} (metrics, testimonials, logos, case study, none)
- **CTA (single action):** {{cta}}
- **Urgency (optional, real only):** {{urgency}}
- **Constraints:** {{constraints}} (word limit, tone, forbidden words, compliance)
- **Brand voice:** {{brandVoice}} (e.g., confident & friendly, no slang)

## Strategy Checklist (follow in order)
1) **Hook**: Start with a sharp observation or pain that matches the audience’s world.
2) **Relevance**: Make it obvious who this is for within the first 2 lines.
3) **Value**: Describe the outcome, not features. Keep it concrete.
4) **Proof**: Add ONE proof point (metric or credible indicator). If none, use “reason to believe” (process, guarantee, small commitment).
5) **CTA**: Ask for ONE next step that’s easy to say yes to.

## Email Rules
✓ 90–160 words per email body unless constraints say otherwise  
✓ 1 CTA only (no extra links)  
✓ Plain-text style with whitespace (1–2 sentence paragraphs)  
✓ No spammy language: “guaranteed”, “act now”, “limited time” unless real and specified  
✓ No fluff intros (“Hope you’re well”)  

## Output Format
Return exactly this structure:

### Version 1 — Short & Punchy
- **Subject (3 options)**:
- **Preheader**:
- **Email body**:
- **CTA line**:
- **Optional bump follow-up (1–2 lines)**:

### Version 2 — Value-led
(same fields)

### Version 3 — Curiosity-led
(same fields)

### Notes for personalization (bullet list)
Provide 5 quick personalization angles tied to {{audience}}.

Now write the emails.

Variables to Customize

{{audience}}

Who the email is for (role, industry, segment)

Example: Operations Managers at 50–200 person logistics companies

{{offerType}}

Type of offer you are selling

Example: SaaS

{{productName}}

Your product or service name

Example: FlowOps

{{valueProposition}}

One sentence describing the core value

Example: Automates dispatch scheduling to cut late deliveries by 20%

{{pain}}

The main problem your audience is experiencing

Example: Manual scheduling causes last-minute changes and missed ETAs

{{outcome}}

The primary outcome you deliver (measurable if possible)

Example: Fewer late deliveries and less time spent on rescheduling

{{proof}}

Credibility to include (metrics/testimonials/logos)

Example: “Reduced late deliveries by 18% in 30 days” (case study)

{{cta}}

A single next step the reader should take

Example: Reply “yes” and I’ll send the 1-page case study

{{urgency}}

Only real urgency (deadline, capacity, event date)

Example: We can take 3 more onboarding slots this month

{{constraints}}

Any constraints (length, tone, forbidden phrases, etc.)

Example: Under 120 words. No hype. Avoid “synergy” and “disruptive”.

{{brandVoice}}

How the email should sound

Example: Direct, friendly, confident, no slang

Example Output

### Version 1 — Short & Punchy
- **Subject (3 options)**: “Late deliveries aren’t a dispatch problem”, “Quick question about your scheduling”, “Idea to reduce reschedules”
- **Preheader**: A simple way to cut dispatch chaos without changing tools.
- **Email body**:
Hey [Name] — quick question.

When schedules change mid-day, does your team end up juggling calls/texts to keep ETAs accurate?

FlowOps automates dispatch scheduling so changes update routes + ETAs automatically. One logistics team cut late deliveries by 18% in 30 days.

If it’s useful, want me to send the 1-page case study?
- **CTA line**: Reply “yes” and I’ll send it.
- **Optional bump follow-up (1–2 lines)**: Just bumping this—should I send the case study, or is someone else the right owner?

Pro Tips

  • 1Write for one reader. Replace “companies” with a specific persona and context.
  • 2Use one proof point only—multiple stats reduce credibility if they feel cherry-picked.
  • 3Keep the CTA low-friction (reply, short call, or “send the case study”).
  • 4If you add urgency, make it real (capacity, deadlines, events) and state it plainly.

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